My friend Emily is the complete package. She loves to learn and has a knack for picking up new things. She's responsible, but relaxed. She loves to go on adventures, whether she's venturing outside her apartment or diving into a good book. This girl must surely have it all! What could she possibly be missing?
Someone to share her adventures with. It's dangerous to go alone. She needs someone to take with her. And who wouldn't want to protect this lovely damsel on her daring adventure through life? Every day is an adventurous exploration of life with Emily. What more could you want? And at the price of just one date, I'd say she's quite a bargain. But because she doesn't talk much, it's a secret to everybody.
So what are you waiting for? Try going on an adventure with Emily. Together, you may even find the missing piece of your heart.
Sounds great! Very convincing ad! I like your short concise sentences, they kept me interested and I actually read through the whole post (something rare for me actually). Good adjective choice too, I liked "lovely damsel", old school.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! You appealed very much to my chivalrous side. I would go on an adventure with your lady.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job! It was good reading this ad, because it seemed directed straight to the reader. You placed good reasoning in it and you weren't pushy on the matter. Good job.
ReplyDeleteGood ad! I liked the questions you posed and overall flow of your writing.
ReplyDeleteFavorite line: And at the price of just one date, I'd say she's quite a bargain. :)
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of rhetorical questions, here! Do YOU think there's something missing?